Jul

7

By Blossom

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Categories: Poems

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Building

#152 – VITAL

 

hot, smothering air
withholding vital water
as thunderstorms build

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4 Responses

  1. MAHARUKH July 8, 2012 | 10:28 AM

    LOVELY HAIKU :) LOVE IT!

  2. Jaideep July 9, 2012 | 2:47 AM

    Creative.. clouds are such wonderful thing in our world!

  3. Blossom July 16, 2012 | 11:58 AM

    MAHARUKH and Jaideep, thank you! I love watching the storms build.

  4. Tora July 17, 2012 | 11:14 AM

    great haiku, I can just picture the clouds!



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